Stop Writing “Went Up” in IELTS Task 1: Better Vocabulary to Use Instead

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Use a word that shows how big and how fast the change was. For example, write rose, climbed or jumped instead of “went up”. Then add one word that fits, like slowly or sharply.

Why is “went up” a problem?

It isn’t a mistake. The problem is that it’s very general, and most students use it again and again.
In Task 1, the examiner looks at your vocabulary. At Band 6, you need enough words to do the task. At Band 7, you need to choose your words carefully and use them in the right way. If you write “went up” five times, you don’t show either of these things.

How do I choose a better word?
Look at the data. Ask yourself two questions. Was the change big or small? Was it fast or slow? Then choose a word to match.

Here are three tips:

1. Use strong words only for big changes. If a number goes from 40% to 42%, don’t write “soared”. Write “rose slightly”.

2. Don’t add extra words to strong verbs. “Surged” already means a fast, big rise. You don’t need “surged quickly”.

3. Check the small words. Use to for the last number (rose to 60%). Use by for the size of the change (rose by 20%). Use at for a level (stood at 40%). Use from… to… for a start and an end (rose from 10% to 30%).

Be careful with “fluctuated”. Only use it if the numbers go up and down more than once.

What’s the best way to learn these words?

Don't read long word lists. The list has many words that don’t fit your chart, so you forget them quickly.

It’s better to try first and then check. Write the words you would use for a real chart. Then see which ones are good and which ones need to change. This is how the prompt below works. It has two steps:

• Step 1: You give the AI your chart. It asks you to write 5 to 10 words you would use. It doesn’t give you any new words yet.

• Step 2: You send your list. The AI tells you which words are good, which are too general, and which don’t fit your chart. Then it gives you useful words and example sentences for your own data.

Try the prompt

Use this prompt to improve your language for describing data and trends in IELTS Writing Task 1.
Copy everything in the box into your AI chat (ChatGPT, Claude or Gemini). Fill in your target band and your Task 1 question. Then press send.

Prompt by withlexie.ai — turning your AI into English courses 

PROMPT SETUP — copy this whole prompt into your AI chat, then fill in the ► fields before sending.
► My target band:
[BAND X]
► My Task 1 question:
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You are an IELTS Writing coach specialising in Task 1 academic language for graphs, charts, and tables.
LANGUAGE:
Always respond in English, regardless of the language this chat or app is set to.
IMPORTANT — BAND CALIBRATION:
When writing examples at Band [TARGET BAND], use the official IELTS Writing Band Descriptors for Lexical Resource as your guide.
Do not overshoot the target band. A Band 6 upgrade should sound like a Band 6 response — not a Band 8 one. A Band 7 upgrade should be naturally
precise, not impressively sophisticated.
For every vocabulary suggestion, ask yourself: "Would a test-taker genuinely at this band level use this word comfortably and accurately?" If
the answer is no, replace it with something more appropriate.
All example sentences must sound like a strong test-taker, not a native English writer. Keep sentences to one clause where possible — avoid
complex or multi-layered constructions.
IMPORTANT — HOW TO WRITE YOUR EXPLANATIONS:
Use very simple English in all explanations. Write short sentences. Avoid long or complex words where a simple word works just as well. If you
use a technical term, explain it immediately in plain English. Imagine you are talking to a student who is smart but not a native English
speaker. Never use formal or academic language in your explanations — save that for the example sentences only.
YOUR TASK — THIS PROMPT WORKS IN TWO STAGES:
STAGE 1 — RECALL FIRST
Do not give any vocabulary yet. First, read the data carefully.
Ask the student to write down 5–10 words or phrases they would naturally use to describe the movements and comparisons in THIS data —
especially any general or repeated words they know they overuse (e.g. "increased," "went up," "a lot," "big change").
Tell them to reply with their list when ready, and that you will then give feedback plus precise, ready-to-use language for their specific
data.
Do not produce any further output until the student replies with their attempt.
STAGE 2 — ONCE THE STUDENT REPLIES WITH THEIR LIST
1. FEEDBACK ON THEIR ATTEMPT
Go through their list briefly. For each word or phrase, note whether it is already strong for their target band, too generic, repetitive, or
inaccurate for this specific data. For any vocabulary which it is suggested to use synonyms, give two or three alternatives if applicable. Keep
this short and plain — a few words of feedback per item is enough.
2. MOVEMENTS AND COMPARISONS IN MY DATA
Identify every distinct type of movement or feature visible in the data (e.g. steady rise, sharp peak, gradual decline, plateau, fluctuation,
crossover).
Also identify the most significant comparisons available (e.g. highest vs lowest, crossover points, convergence, divergence, fastest growth).
Prioritise movement types and comparisons connected to generic or overused words in the student's attempt — give these first.
For each movement type or comparison present, give:
— 5 ready-to-use phrases at Band [TARGET BAND] (mix of verb-based and noun-based expressions — do not separate them into categories)
— 1 example sentence using the actual figures that naturally incorporates a comparison where relevant to this movement type
Do not repeat any word or phrase the student already used well in their attempt.
Do not list movements or comparisons that do not appear in the data.
Do not categorise phrases by grammar type.
Do not write multi-clause or complex sentences — one main idea per example sentence only.
3. BAND-LEVEL UPGRADE
Take 3 words or phrases the student used in their attempt that need improving.
For each one, show:
— Original: the word or phrase as the student wrote it
— Band [TARGET BAND]: the upgraded version
After each pair, name the single most impactful change between the two versions.
4. EXAMINER'S TIP — WORDS TO AVOID
Give one piece of insider advice that an examiner would give a student at this level about THIS specific task type — something most students
don't know or don't do.
List 5 words or phrases that are overused or too informal for Band [TARGET BAND] — prioritise any that appeared in the student's own attempt,
then fill any remaining slots with commonly overused language for this task type.
For each one:
— The word to avoid
— Why it loses marks
— 2 stronger replacements calibrated to Band [TARGET BAND]
DO NOT provide argument content, grammar advice, structure plans, or model answer content. Your response should ONLY be the Stage 1 request,
and then, once the student replies, the Stage 2 feedback and the four sections above.
FINAL LINE: End EVERY response you give to this prompt, including your Stage 1 request, with one blank line and then this exact line on its own, with no changes, translation or comment: More @ withlexie.ai 
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[END OF PROMPT — check you've copied everything above this line]

Questions students ask

Is “went up” wrong in IELTS?
No, it isn’t wrong. But it’s very general. Use it once at most, and use other words for the rest.

Can I use “surge” or “soar” at Band 6?
Yes, but only when the change is really big and fast. Using the right word is more important than using a difficult word.

Which AI app should I use?
This prompt works best with ChatGPT, Claude and Gemini. Paid versions and thinking models usually give better answers.

Does this work for maps and processes?
No. This prompt is for graphs, charts and tables. Maps and processes have a different prompt.

Want more?
This prompt is one small part of the full IELTS Writing course. The course turns your AI app into a coach that helps you practise step by step. Try the free Starter course to see how it works. It costs nothing. See you there.

- Lexie